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Aug 15, 2016HELECTA rated this title 0.5 out of 5 stars
This might be a good story, but grammatical and punctuation errors made it difficult to follow. There were also myriad examples of two words run together (runtogether), many dashes, colons, semi-colons which confused my understanding of what was happening in the story. I know it was a translation, but it seems to me the editing for these things was non-existent to the point where I simply stopped reading out of frustration.